Storyboards easy to follow, full sense of story
Good key framing
Simple, easy to create imagery
Text isn't very necessary
Good amount of research
Areas for improvement:
Is their colour?
Pace of pan/ movement
Will the idents last 10 seconds?
Maybe have the first frame in the middle? Taxi there or something before, will it last 60 seconds?
In the last frame try emptying the plate of food and have "top ten" in ketchup or crumbs
Liquid flow could be complicated
Pain killer ident works well